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Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1
Purple Balloon. I'm sorry that I got in the middle of you and Scribes 'Debate' I didn't mean to intrude. I've read a small bit of your work before, and ...
Jan 18, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 4
I reread the prologue, and I don't believe that I missed anything. I love all of your fight scenes, and I think they are very well written, don't get me ...
Jan 18, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 4
I just read your reply to my critique on Chapter 3. You asked me to keep giving you grammar errors that I find, so here are a few for Chapter ...
Jan 17, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1
Okay. So, I have spent the Better part of four and a half hours rereading your work, chapters 1-3. I took into account the things you said after my reply, ...
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1
Hey. Thanks so much for taking my critique in such a high account. I'm honestly flattered. I wasn't expecting that. Also, thanks for standing up for me with writergirl. Actually, ...
Jan 13, 2007
